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POEM INSPIRATION
Each year, I receive an email that reminds me to think about writing a poem and entering it into the University of Canberra Vice-Chancellor’s International Poetry Prize. So I gave it a go, once more, for this year 2018, with the hope that one day I might be lucky enough to be a finalist. Well not this year for me! But on saying this, it really isn’t about writing for a poetry prize but about getting me to sit down and think about putting together a group of words to express a feeling, thought, a moment! Here below is this year’s effort and it’s about ageing! It’s about the process of losing one’s youth, about the acceptance of growing old, and about reaching the end of one’s life with the hope that its been a worthy one…
Title: “Ageing Old Is!” Poem
ageing old is…
bones creaking with osteoarthritis – as their new best friend
aged exhausted muscles constantly reminding the body – not to over stretch
unsightly mottled skin – mirroring years of weather abuse
weakened eyesight tightening focus – while grasping visions with expiry dates
failing dulled memory – showing signs of future incompetence…
ageing old is…
menacing hearing loss – nursing awkward miscommunications
hunched aching back – engaging in old people appearances
arthritic disabling hands – struggling with finite activity
grey loose hair gathering up – in sadden hair brushes
smelly wee collections – in places once pure clean and sweet…
ageing old is…
crusty masses of harden skin – mounting under feet once nimble
bulging belly fat – lazily lounging around body central
facial life lines time-sharing with emotions – of laughter and sullenness
overburdened knees locking – halfway down and halfway up in indecision
flabby weaken arms – gratefully receiving hugs of love and attention…
ageing old is…
brittle coffee stained teeth – sharing smiles of endearment
a stumpy wrinkled ring finger – wearing sacred tarnished wedding band
black annoying hairs on long gone youthful slender legs – now meandering on old
once expensive manicured nails – now surrendering to lack of significant care
blood pumping at high rates of pressure – finding solitude in cholesterol tablets…
ageing old is…
under-active misbehaving thyroid – causing socially unacceptable obesity
vitamin D lacking skin – demanding a daily show-down with the holy sun
unsaddled mammary glands hanging – as a constant reminder of motherhood long past
periodic kind verbal reminders to loved ones – that this time span is limited
a tiredness not of lack of sleep – but from nearing the end of one’s existence…
ageing old is…
a knowing
that this old human ruin – now approaching depletion – has endured a life well spent…
Poem © Karen Robinson – August 2018
CONCLUSION
It’s another day now and the sun has come out and dried up all the rain … time to go out and play, rejoice and enjoy the one and only life we get to live…

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So true. I liked how your poem put the ageing process into such poignant phrases.
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Thank you – so appreciate you taking the time to read my poem…sincerely Karen
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being satisfy’d with a Lifetime–
’tis one’s preeminent reward
Very nice poem, Karen.
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Thank you… we get to this time in our lives and find ourselves doing a lot of reflection…warm regards Karen
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Thanks Claudia…and you are right – every day a blessing…warm regards Karen
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Very familiar to me and well-expressed. Every day a new chance.
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